Internet Bill of Rights - Revision history

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 ==What was left out?==
-# This [[Internet Bill of Rights]] is focused on the collection of personal data on the internet as though that is the be all, and end all of the Internet. Perhaps we need a paradigm shift away from any collection of personal data and find some other metric to inform the internet of our Intentions and Tolerance for personal data collection.
+# This [[Internet Bill of Rights]] is focused on the collection of personal data on the internet as though that is the be-all, and end-all of the Internet. Perhaps we need a paradigm shift away from any collection of personal data and find some other metric to inform the internet of our Intentions and Tolerance for personal data collection.
 # This bill doesn't reflect the lopsided control that corporations have over every interchange on the internet as result of the [[Contract of Adhesion]] which has allowed them to enforce their terms on the users without the user ever given the opportunity to state any of their terms.

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 ==What was left out?==
-This bill doesn't reflect the lopsided control that corporations have over every interchange on the internet as result of the [[Contract of Adhesion]] which has allowed them to enforce their terms on the users without the user ever given the opportunity to state any of their terms.
+# This [[Internet Bill of Rights]] is focused on the collection of personal data on the internet as though that is the be all, and end all of the Internet. Perhaps we need a paradigm shift away from any collection of personal data and find some other metric to inform the internet of our Intentions and Tolerance for personal data collection.
 ==References==

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 ==What was left out?==
-This bill doesn't reflect the lopsided control that corporations have over every interchange on the internet as result of the [[Contract of Adhesion]] which has allow them to enforce their terms on the users without the user ever given the opportunity to state any of their terms.
+This bill doesn't reflect the lopsided control that corporations have over every interchange on the internet as result of the [[Contract of Adhesion]] which has allowed them to enforce their terms on the users without the user ever given the opportunity to state any of their terms.
 ==References==

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 ==What was left out?==
-This bill doesn't reflect the lopsided control that corporations have over every interchange on the internet as result of the [[Contract of Adhesion]] which has allow them to enforce their terms on the users.
+This bill doesn't reflect the lopsided control that corporations have over every interchange on the internet as result of the [[Contract of Adhesion]] which has allow them to enforce their terms on the users without the user ever given the opportunity to state any of their terms.
 ==References==

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		+	This bill doesn't reflect the lopsided control that corporations have over every interchange on the internet as result of the [[Contract of Adhesion]] which has allow them to enforce their terms on the users.

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 ==Solutions==
-The original draft begins with the statement that "The internet age and digital revolution have changed Americans' way of life. As our lives and the US economy are more tied to the internet, it is essential to provide Americans with basic protections online.
+The original draft begins with the statement that "The internet age and digital revolution have changed Americans' way of life. As our lives and the US economy are more tied to the internet, it is essential to provide Americans with basic protections online." It is likely that this bill will see a lot of discussion before it ever gets introduced to Congress.
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 (1) to have access to and knowledge of all collection and uses of personal data by companies;

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 Given all the problems that user's have experienced with the privacy and their money on the internet the democratic party in the US House of Representative asked Ro Khanna, representing Silicon Valley, to draft a set of principles that everyone can agree on and adhere to in April of 2018.
-In a New York Times opinion piece Kara Swisher introduces<ref>Kara Swisher, ''Introducing the Internet Bill of Rights: Democrats promise that if they win back the House, they will start regulating Silicon Valley.''  (2018-10-07) New York Times p. R9 https://www.nytimes.com/2018/10/04/opinion/ro-khanna-internet-bill-of-rights.html</ref> and comments on the [[Internet Bill of Rights]].
+In a New York Times opinion piece Kara Swisher introduces<ref>Kara Swisher, ''Introducing the Internet Bill of Rights: Democrats promise that if they win back the House, they will start regulating Silicon Valley.''  (2018-10-07) New York Times p. R9 https://www.nytimes.com/2018/10/04/opinion/ro-khanna-internet-bill-of-rights.html</ref> and comments on the resultant [[Internet Bill of Rights]] produced by Khanna with the help of a wide range of users and experts.
 ==Problems==

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	==Context==		==Context==
		+	Given all the problems that user's have experienced with the privacy and their money on the internet the democratic party in the US House of Representative asked Ro Khanna, representing Silicon Valley, to draft a set of principles that everyone can agree on and adhere to in April of 2018.
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	In a New York Times opinion piece Kara Swisher introduces<ref>Kara Swisher, ''Introducing the Internet Bill of Rights: Democrats promise that if they win back the House, they will start regulating Silicon Valley.'' (2018-10-07) New York Times p. R9 https://www.nytimes.com/2018/10/04/opinion/ro-khanna-internet-bill-of-rights.html</ref> and comments on the [[Internet Bill of Rights]].		In a New York Times opinion piece Kara Swisher introduces<ref>Kara Swisher, ''Introducing the Internet Bill of Rights: Democrats promise that if they win back the House, they will start regulating Silicon Valley.'' (2018-10-07) New York Times p. R9 https://www.nytimes.com/2018/10/04/opinion/ro-khanna-internet-bill-of-rights.html</ref> and comments on the [[Internet Bill of Rights]].